Sunday, November 28, 2004

Controlled Pain

Controlled Pain

Ooo, might I submit
the thought is not old
fluid dreams demand
that you have control.

Never lose sight of treasures
buried so deep in your will
my anticipation's delight
grows to a stuffed swill.

Gasping for that first breath
after the soft whisper of pain
peaks rising to descend
begging you to do it again.

Del Cano 2004

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

A hardened heart stutter
you give me to be fresh
as I am mopping my brow
at thoughts of submissive flesh

So bear with me
at what you might gain
'tis something more I wish
than this controlled pain...*wink*

Hot write, my friend...."submissive" indeed!

Hugs,
Chris