Monday, June 21, 2004

Spread It Around

Spread It Around

We reach for the deepest feelings
In our attempt to pull every bit out
And grasp the strings of hearts
As we wield our verses clout.

At times we stomp and yell
Then tender goes the word
To touch the souls of mankind
extremes you’ve never heard.

We stand in judgment of us
And tell all we just tried
To reach the depths of feelings
and not keep them held inside.

We sow love, sorrow and pain
Like seeds we spread the news
And cultivate the crop of verse
So others may share our blues.
:hat




Edited by: Pleasing Persephone at: 5/16/04 10:06 am
titch k
Time Traveler
Posts: 849
(5/11/04 12:48 am)
Reply Re: Spread It Around :hat - smile I shall even light your pipe you wonderful soul - this an example of your majesty in flight!
love Titch

Pleasing Persephone
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Posts: 2044
(5/12/04 8:18 am)
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ezSupporter

Re: Spread It Around

Love it!!!!

~Dragged to the depths of Hell
I still spring eternal~



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Kelly’s Kreations

DelCano
Posts: 474
(5/14/04 5:45 pm)
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ezSupporter
Re: Spread It Around I am honored Titch. Flight can be wearing though. And the wind.:D

Thanks Titch.

Spencer

Pleasing Persephone
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Posts: 2069
(5/16/04 10:07 am)
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ezSupporter

Re: Spread It Around Just had to come back to this!!!!!!

~Dragged to the depths of Hell
I still spring eternal~



~Please visit my webpage~
Kelly’s Kreations

DelCano
Posts: 498
(5/16/04 9:41 pm)
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ezSupporter
Re: Spread It Around ~Persephone's Pick~ I am honored. :bow: :bow: THANK YOU, PLEASING!

Spencer

Edited by: DelCano at: 5/16/04 9:43 pm
divasoul
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(6/14/04 8:23 am)
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Re: Spread It Around ~Persephone's Pick~ I like this. Especially those last two lines.


Bet

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
The caged bird sings with a fearful trill
of things unknown but longed for still
and his tune is heard on the distant hill
for the caged bird sings of freedom.


~Maya Angelou

DelCano
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(6/16/04 6:16 am)
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ezSupporter
Re: Spread It Around ~Persephone's Pick~ Thank you, Diva. So appreciate your read and comment.
:D
Spencer

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1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Yes...you spread it around quite well, thank you!  I am definitely NOT complaining!  Excellent write!

Hugs!
Chris