Saturday, May 21, 2005

First Kiss

My pounding heart
seemed as drums
soul trembling with
expectant hums

lips trembling
yours dance and sing
first precious kiss
clipped dragonfly wings

In response to Dragonfly Wings
by Naia

Del Cano 2005 February
 

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

This was a short poam I like long once they are the ones that usually take my breath away, but this one I had to breath after I read it. It was particularly beautiful. It seemed to describe the exact way we all feel when we go in for that first kiss. I truly loved it. Great job!