I had an altercation today
was not a truly a big thing
but I must admit, I felt it
feeling sorta like a big sting
There was a kind of rumble
a wild flapping and swinging
the rose buds were no protection
damn, it felt like some stinging.
In the yard tending to plants
while humming and singing
a swarm of bees appeared
chose me for their winging
I had an altercation today
with not so nice a bit of flinging
this swarm of bees was aggressive
and I lost the fight to their stinging.
Del Cano 2005 April
4 comments:
Spencer
A quite differnet entry. Altercations of any kind are usually unpleasant. Too much hurt.
Always, Carly :)
Sounds like the bumbles won the war for the day....hope you're okay!
Hugs,
Chris
"I had an altercation today
with not so nice a bit of flinging
this swarm of bees was aggressive
and I lost the fight to their stinging."
I loved this verse.... nice rhythm, and it made me grin :) Glad to have found your journal :)
~Dawn
hahahahaha, spence!! this tickled the old stinger!! lol can picture it now: spencer out in the yard just a swingin' away at the air, or so passers-by would tend to think since buzzers are so doggone little!! maybe "a bit schitzo" some would think!! you creative devil, you!! also, i'm LUBBIN' your "i love me some you" series ... you should add more to it ... it's absolutely amazing!! readin' you all da way down da line, my dear sweet friend ... and lubbin' your endearing friendship ... thank you for you and all that you do ... you are a precious soul!
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