We reach for the deepest feelings
In our attempt to pull every bit out
And grasp the strings of hearts
As we wield our verses clout.
At times we stomp and yell
Then tender goes the word
To touch the souls of mankind
extremes you’ve never heard.
We stand in judgment of us
And tell all we just tried
To reach the depths of feelings
and not keep them held inside.
We sow love, sorrow and pain
Like seeds we spread the news
And cultivate the crop of verse
So others may share our blues.
Edited by: Pleasing Persephone at: 5/16/04 10:06 am
titch k
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(5/11/04 12:48 am)
Reply Re: Spread It Around - smile I shall even light your pipe you wonderful soul - this an example of your majesty in flight!
love Titch Pleasing Persephone
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Re: Spread It Around
Love it!!!!
~Dragged to the depths of Hell
I still spring eternal~
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Kelly’s Kreations
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(5/14/04 5:45 pm)
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Re: Spread It Around I am honored Titch. Flight can be wearing though. And the wind.
Thanks Titch.
Spencer Pleasing Persephone
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Re: Spread It Around Just had to come back to this!!!!!!
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I still spring eternal~
~Please visit my webpage~
Kelly’s Kreations
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(5/16/04 9:41 pm)
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Re: Spread It Around ~Persephone's Pick~ I am honored. THANK YOU, PLEASING!
Spencer Edited by: DelCano at: 5/16/04 9:43 pm
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Re: Spread It Around ~Persephone's Pick~ I like this. Especially those last two lines.
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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
The caged bird sings with a fearful trill
of things unknown but longed for still
and his tune is heard on the distant hill
for the caged bird sings of freedom.
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Re: Spread It Around ~Persephone's Pick~ Thank you, Diva. So appreciate your read and comment.
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1 comment:
Yes...you spread it around quite well, thank you! I am definitely NOT complaining! Excellent write!
Hugs!
Chris
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