What can I say to make it stronger
to make you see the depth of my feeling?
To make you, without a doubt, recognize
how you keep my heart and mind reeling.
Knowing I love you is simple and easy
but wanting you to feel just how much
you have wrapped and packaged me
in the firmness of your loving clutch.
Shall I compare it to the flow of a river
or perhaps the height of a mighty mountain?
Could tell you its much like the breadth of the sea
or Niagra Falls, a continious flowing fountain.
Might I show you by sailing high in the sky
where many birds can't reach quite there;
the stars drift from places we feel are around
yet, we are not sure if that point actually has air.
Should I walk the line around this world
and touch each heavenly created shore
and if that doesn't do enough for you to know
I can be magical and do a whole lot more.
I need you to know just how deep my love is
and how powerfully our love puts me in bliss.
There is nothing I can think of I won't do
cause my love for you is really bigger than this.
Wow, I love me some you within Poetic Bliss
Del Cano
Wow Spencer. You should sell this to a music label...it reads like a song. I have just popped over here from checking my sidebar because my alerts are messed up again...dangit! ;) C. http://journals.aol.com/gdireneoe/thedailies
ReplyDeleteI would love for a man to feel this way about me...how very nice Spencer.
ReplyDeleteSo very beautiful. Your woman is very, very lucky indeed.
ReplyDeleteI love your writings so much, my friend.
Dianna
Ode to a Poet
ReplyDeletethe Muse is passionately full
Of Love's tales;
And in telling them
His heart becomes replete
With Love's melodies...
they send him on a ship
Through narrows and out to sea;
And were it not for Love's snares
His heart would explode
Into a shooting star
In the galaxy!
Oh Mus take us with you!
Let us soar
with eagles
Let us dance
with the wind
Let us ride, with you,
the stallions of
Love's desire
And then melt
Into the morning dew
Hello......This poem is quite beautiful. I like every word written in this poem. I really feel that this is and shall remain great poetry........Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteBRAVO ! Alas someone else knows the truth that to simply say "I Love You" is not enough, will never be enough. Kudos my friend.
ReplyDeleteThat is very beautiful. You captured the essence of love. I think that we all feel this way!
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