you can revisit and repost this as many times as you want and i'd STILL never tire of it! *serene sigh* ... hey! lookie there! right there! in the photo! do you see it? look harder, with your soul ... well, i see it ;) ... touch the water with your finger ... what do you see in the ripples? the reflection(s) of the trees are shifting shape ... now can you see it? *contented sigh* yeah, me too ...
Everytime I read your poetry..all I could say is "wow" and you know I say it as if my heart is the one saying it. I can feel this poem as if it was taking me away in a very serene place. Gem :-)
you can revisit and repost this as many times as you want and i'd STILL never tire of it! *serene sigh* ... hey! lookie there! right there! in the photo! do you see it? look harder, with your soul ... well, i see it ;) ... touch the water with your finger ... what do you see in the ripples? the reflection(s) of the trees are shifting shape ... now can you see it? *contented sigh* yeah, me too ...
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Everytime I read your poetry..all I could say is "wow" and you know I say it as if my heart is the one saying it. I can feel this poem as if it was taking me away in a very serene place.
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You have a gift for stating a simple thought so completely and clearly that it hits the reader as a novel idea!
ReplyDeleteLovely simple write.
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Mia:)