Sunday, July 31, 2005

Make Love To Me

 

 

I can feel the whispers in the words
holding back not one pulse
breathing intermitantly
senses bout to convulse

Cravings flair as light
ponces upon the scene
nothing but ecstacy
and its balming screen

I've loved you a thousand times
in the briefness of a thought
ravishing touches from your heart
those tingly feels you've brought

Appealing to the depths of senses
partaking only of the purest fantasy
brings on the sounds of music
when you say "Make Love To Me"

Del Cano 2005 July



8 comments:

  1. Erotic, vibrant, stunningly beautiful.  You are a master of love songs.

    FairEllen

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  2. WOW. This is CLASSSY!. I simply love this piece. It's so tastefully sensual and the purity of felling is palpable.

    Bravo Spennie:)
    Love
    Mia

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  3. HI Spencer , I am just waiting for another one of your poetic assignments....   :)  

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  4. He said,

    I've loved you a thousand times
    in the briefness of a thought
    ravishing touches from your heart
    those tingly feels you've brought

    She said,

    It's the way you whisper my name
    which makes me drift into ecstacy
    and causes me whisper back
    Please, Make Love to Me!

    This writ is very sensual!!

    MsPScott

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  5. Wow!  Breathtaking!
    I too am waiting for another Poetry Assignment!!!  Any ideas for a new one, bouncing around in your head?????  I hope so!
    Tina

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  6. Beautifully written :) You are quite talented

    Maria

    http://journals.aol.com/curvyanglintexas/HeartfeltExpressions

    PS I too, write poetry. A site of mine listing some of my writings are listed in my AOL journal. In the Favorite Sites section toward the bottom of the list, if you are interested in viewing it. If you do view my site, all that needs to be done is click the Poetry button on the left and there will be a drop down menu to make your selection.

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  7. *sigh* your romanticism is dreamy ... you romantic, you ;) ... that picture is classy and gorgeous ... the more we interract, the more i'm luvvin' you to pieces, my friend ... *huge strong hugs*

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