Sunday, November 28, 2004

Controlled Pain

Controlled Pain

Ooo, might I submit
the thought is not old
fluid dreams demand
that you have control.

Never lose sight of treasures
buried so deep in your will
my anticipation's delight
grows to a stuffed swill.

Gasping for that first breath
after the soft whisper of pain
peaks rising to descend
begging you to do it again.

Del Cano 2004

1 comment:

  1. A hardened heart stutter
    you give me to be fresh
    as I am mopping my brow
    at thoughts of submissive flesh

    So bear with me
    at what you might gain
    'tis something more I wish
    than this controlled pain...*wink*

    Hot write, my friend...."submissive" indeed!

    Hugs,
    Chris

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